Correction

Part One : How it all began

A. Pick out the elements that used to be part of a normal world and the elements that are the norm now.

Aspects of normal lifeToday’s norm
Millions of women have a job. Apparently not all women work.
Banknotes or paper money existed and was widely used for groceries.Banknotes are obsolete (« can’t buy anything with it », line 7) and are being replaced by plastic cards (« Everything went on the Compubank », line 43).
Humour such as signs on cash registers saying « In God We Trust, All Others Pay Cash » was widespread.Such jokes are banned and considered as blasphemy. This example is reminiscent of Oliver Cromwell’s Protectorate (1649-1660) in England where plays were banned.

B. what was the turning point between « then » and « now »? Quote the text.

Line 25 : « It was after the catastrophe, when they shot the President and machine-gunned the Congress and the army declared a state of emergency. »

C. Write a short chronology of events.

  1. Assassination of the President
  2. Congress is machine-gunned
  3. State of emergency declared
  4. Constitution is suspended
  5. No rioting in the streets
  6. People stayed at home at night, watching TV and waiting for instructions
  7. Prolonged state of suspended animation
  8. Censorship and closure of media
  9. Appearance of roadblocks
  10. Identipasses
  11. Elections postponed

D.

Women or American women

« All those women having jobs : hard to imagine now, but thousands of them had jobs, millions. » (line 1-3) – unemployment of women to guarantee their servitude, loss of women’s rights. The first person narrator-focalizer is a woman. Her friend Moira quotes an expression of the narrator’s mother : »They’ve been building up to this. It’s you and me up against the wall, baby. »

E. Summary

F. What ingredients does the author use to turn normality to dystopia?

  1. Technology (from papermoney to plastic card, « everything went on Compubank ») and media are used to give further control to the totalitarian power.
  2. Symbolic violence against democratic institutions (President, Congress, suspended Constitution, media) to establish totalitarianism.
  3. An invisible enemy (« There wasn’t even an enemy you could put your finger on » (line 38)) and scapegoating some members of society (« Islamic fanatics ») – Similar device as in Orwell’s Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949) where the enemy changes at whim.
  4. Fundamental rights are deprived (freedom of association/riots, elections postponed, censorship of media, Identipass and roadblocks to control movement)
  5. Internal focalization of a first-person narrator indicates that freethinking and independent thought are banned.- Comparison between « then » and « now » indicates nostalgia resulting from a life of extreme misery and even uncertainty and hopelessness for the future.